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PostSubject: Virginia   Mon Feb 12, 2007 3:17 pm

This may be inappropriate i no it was for pa cyber chat well each chapter is a name of one of my fave songs so sry if they dont go terribly well w/ the story enjoy Smile


Chapter One: Meet Virginia

Once there was a girl named Virginia. She lived with her mom and dog. Her dad died of alcohol poisoning well thatís what her mom said Virginia knew he was drinking and driving. When her dad died she was 7 her mom thought Virginia didnít understand and quite frankly her mom really didnít care. After a few months her mother became an alcoholic too. It was quite sad and Virginia was terrified when her mother came home drunk. Sometimes her mom would be so drunk she would pass out on her way in the door. A few years went by and Virginia got older, much more mature, and MUCH more aware well then she already was. By this time she was 12. Ahh the lovely age of almost a teen ha yeah rite. Virginia went into a hole of sadness it seemed like. Everyone calling her names making fun of her was eating her alive. One day at school there was a new gurl. She was very nice, Virginia liked her a lot. Her name was Leigha (Lia). She seemed very scared and unaware. Everyday she wore Black leggings a red checkered skirt w/ chains and a black and red stripped shirt. In gym she wore her gym uniform bottoms never top. One day a girl was saying terrible things to Leigha. Virginia tried to stand up for her but she couldnít Leigha had ran away. Virginia stayed back but did go after her. Virginia was worried about her. She followed her to the bathroom but waited for a few minutes to catch her breath outside the door. All of the sudden Virginia heard something in the bathroom so she went in.

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PostSubject: Re: Virginia   Mon Feb 12, 2007 8:03 pm

Oh no, it's appropriate, as long as it has no graphic violence or sexual content. And I didn't see any of that in this one so far, so it's okay. And I think it's very good. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Virginia   Mon Feb 12, 2007 8:38 pm

ok kool it has slitting of the wrists but thats only a lil part and if i break any violations i wont care if u take it down

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PostSubject: Re: Virginia   Tue Feb 13, 2007 8:23 am

Awe.
Jill I love it!

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PostSubject: Re: Virginia   Wed Mar 21, 2007 12:55 pm

sry i stopped writing cause i lost it sry

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