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PostSubject: I would die for you   Thu Mar 01, 2007 3:45 pm

this was going to be a poem but it started turning into a story and sorry brittany i used the name brittany in honer of my friend who cut so much she almost died but i made sure she stopped it sad sry
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I Would Die For You Crying or Very sad

I walk up to a crush and say
“I would die for you.”
He says “yeah right”
I go away holding my tears in

The next day I walk up to another crush and say
“I would die for you!”
He says “Why would I like you your just a little kid!”
I go away once again holding my tears in.

That night I think ok tomorrow I ask my third crush and hope he likes me.

The next day I walk up to my last crush and say
“I would die for you!”
He says, “Go to h***!!”
This time I run home and go to my room with a box cutter I write a note.

It says: Dear Crushes,
I said I would die for you. Obviously you thought I was bluffing. Well guess what I wasn’t, so here is where I realize I wouldn’t die for you I would die for me and any one who cared about me. This is where I say I would never die for you!!
Hate always,
Brittany

She cuts into her skin the words ‘I told you’
She made sure they were deep after finishing her “art” she cuts x’s until she bleeds to death.

Now she watches from a puffy cloud her 3 crushes read the note and her arm. They are now crying. They got what they deserved and Brittany will now watch over them to make sure they stay safe because she does still care about them. She made the statement true that she would really die for them.

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PostSubject: Re: I would die for you   Thu Mar 01, 2007 4:25 pm

Ohhh... Crying or Very sad

She didn't really die, did she? Cause that would have made things even sadder.

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PostSubject: Re: I would die for you   Thu Mar 01, 2007 7:18 pm

no she didnt die yet.. im making sure of that its a secret how though lol

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PostSubject: Re: I would die for you   Tue Mar 06, 2007 10:38 am

Awe.

That was really really good Jill.
Sad.
I like sad stories!

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PostSubject: Re: I would die for you   Fri Mar 30, 2007 12:46 pm

Yes that was very pretty. And sad. It's almost like a poem and story in one. I really like it.
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PostSubject: Re: I would die for you   Fri Mar 30, 2007 1:08 pm

im glad u liked it Smile

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