the notebook writer
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 |  Subject: poem -- amusement park  Mon Apr 02, 2007 10:36 am | |
| for adem .....
Amusement Park
Amusement park
That’s how I feel
Because my stomach’s on
The Ferris wheel
And my heart’s on
The twisty thing
And my soul is on
The thing with wings
My eyes just came off
The ride that spins like craz’
And my brain is in the maze
My heart just slipped
On the mountain climbing
Yes this is how I feel
I feel like I’m at the
Amusement park |
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the pitbulls voice
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| | Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Mon Apr 02, 2007 12:56 pm | |
| wow that was wow really good
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the notebook writer
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| | Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:04 pm | |
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Tears_of_Thoth
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| | Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Fri Apr 06, 2007 3:28 pm | |
| Ooh, cool, that's exactly how I felt riding a small coaster a couple years ago- I'm not getting on it again! X_X _________________   May your ka live, and may you spend millions of years, you lover of Thebes, sitting with your face to the north wind, and your eyes beholding happiness.
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the notebook writer
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| | Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:49 am | |
| aw why ? .... i love this feeling ! |
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C.o.o.k.i.e.M.o.n.s.t.e.r
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| | Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Fri Apr 20, 2007 12:00 pm | |
| Wow. You are a really good Writer. None of my poems rhyme really, but this one does.
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| | Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Mon Apr 23, 2007 2:49 pm | |
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Kristi
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| | Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Tue May 08, 2007 3:11 pm | |
| That reminds me kind of of how I feel when I'm nervous.. lol. Or something like that. That's a really creative poem, Leana. I like it. |
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