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PostSubject: poem -- amusement park   Mon Apr 02, 2007 10:36 am

for adem .....

Amusement Park

Amusement park
Thatís how I feel
Because my stomachís on
The Ferris wheel
And my heartís on
The twisty thing
And my soul is on
The thing with wings
My eyes just came off
The ride that spins like crazí
And my brain is in the maze
My heart just slipped
On the mountain climbing
Yes this is how I feel
I feel like Iím at the
Amusement park
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PostSubject: Re: poem -- amusement park   Mon Apr 02, 2007 12:56 pm

wow that was wow really good

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PostSubject: Re: poem -- amusement park   Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:04 pm

shank you <3333
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PostSubject: Re: poem -- amusement park   Fri Apr 06, 2007 3:28 pm

Ooh, cool, that's exactly how I felt riding a small coaster a couple years ago- I'm not getting on it again! X_X

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PostSubject: Re: poem -- amusement park   Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:49 am

aw why ? .... i love this feeling !
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PostSubject: Re: poem -- amusement park   Fri Apr 20, 2007 12:00 pm

Wow. You are a really good Writer. None of my poems rhyme really, but this one does.

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PostSubject: Re: poem -- amusement park   Mon Apr 23, 2007 2:49 pm

just a little
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PostSubject: Re: poem -- amusement park   Tue May 08, 2007 3:11 pm

That reminds me kind of of how I feel when I'm nervous.. lol. Or something like that. That's a really creative poem, Leana. I like it.
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