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PostSubject: Why   Sat May 26, 2007 6:35 pm

Why dont they listen
why must i be sumone im not
why dont they accept me
why do no like me that way
why do i care

why didnt i listen
why did i become sumone im not
why do i care if they accept me
Why do i like no guys or girls that way

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its cause im different and if they can't deal with it o well


haha the ending got screweed up sry

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PostSubject: Re: Why   Tue May 29, 2007 4:31 pm

Yeah, the ending could use a bit of work...other than that, I liked it very much!

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PostSubject: Re: Why   Tue May 29, 2007 5:09 pm

Very cute!

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PostSubject: Re: Why   Tue May 29, 2007 5:18 pm

thanks and i wrote that at 2 in the morning cause i had a weird dream and couldnt sleep so i got out my journal lol

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PostSubject: Re: Why   Tue May 29, 2007 6:12 pm

Awe. I love doing that. Writing in the middle of the night!

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PostSubject: Re: Why   Tue May 29, 2007 6:23 pm

Writing in the middle of the night = bliss.

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PostSubject: Re: Why   Tue May 29, 2007 6:35 pm

yeah it does. That is when I write alot of my good stories! lol.

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PostSubject: Re: Why   Wed May 30, 2007 10:33 am

haha yeah thats the only time i think clearly about one thing at a time haha

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