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PostSubject: Our Biggest Mistake Pt.1   Tue May 29, 2007 3:34 pm

Haha. I know that the title is off of Grey's Anatomy, but I started writing this before that episode, and guess what? My story is so close to what happened in that episode of Grey's its not even funny. lol.

Characters-
Leilah- 16 yr old girl. Confused.
Conner- 18 yr old guy. Confused and uncertain.
Kacie- 17 yr old girl. Conner's girlfriend, Leilah's best friend.

Scene-
Conner is sitting on the porch of his parents house in a housing devolopment. Then Leilah walks up to him. She looks very sad.

Leilah- What happened last night Conner?
Conner- Leilah, honestly I don't know.
Leilah- Is that all you can say?! I dont know?! I mean, I'm confused too but that is no excuse!!
Conner- Please don't yell at me Leilah. My parents are right inside.


Scene-
Leilah sits down next to Conner and has tears down her face.

Leilah- I'm sorry Conner. I'm sorry that I am such a disspointment to you.
Conner- Its not like that. Its just, I am confused about the whole thing.
Leilah- What about Kacie? What are you going to tell her, huh?
Conner- Leilah please.
Leilah- Conner! No! We ruined a good friendship over this. Its not that easy just to let go!
Conner- You dont think I dont know that?
Leilah-(after long pause)*looks at conner* I know that you know that. You just dont act like it.
Conner- How am I supposed to act?
Leilah- You can tell me what to do. Or atleast you can be a little sympathetic.
Conner- Can I still be your friend? We can probable work this out.
Leilah- Yeah but Kacie, we wil both lose her.
Conner- How?
Leilah- She is my best friend. I cant just tell her I'm pregnant and not tell her who the father is.
Conner- Well, just dont tell her.
Leilah- ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! What am I supposed to do?! Avoid her for nine months with no explanation to her at all?!
Conner- No. Just dont tell her who the father is.
Leilah- Conner, I cant lie to her! She is my best friend. And she will want to know.
Conner- I'm just scared Leilah. I dont want to lose her. Out of all the girls I've ever dated she is the one I love. She is the one that I want to spend the rest of my life with. But this will ruin my chance at doing that.
Leilah- *looks at watch* Holy crap!
Conner- What?
Leilah- Kacie will be here any minute. She runs past your house everyday around this time of day and if she sees us, she will stop. I have to go. I cant face her yet.
Conner- Relax. We will just tell her that you were dropping something off.
Leilah- No, I will just tell her that I was planning on running home with her from here.
Conner- I guess that will work. But we still need to talk.
Leilah- Call me later. Then we can talk.


Scene-
Conner and Leilah are standing on Conner's front lawn when Kacie runs up.

There will be more soon. I already have like the next 3 or 4 parts written. I just love making you guys wait! lol.

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PostSubject: Re: Our Biggest Mistake Pt.1   Tue May 29, 2007 4:33 pm

*applauds*
*applauds*
*applauds*

Much better than my lousy excuse for a play! D=
*shudders at the thought of it*

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PostSubject: Re: Our Biggest Mistake Pt.1   Tue May 29, 2007 4:43 pm

Haha. I dont think so! But thank you!

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